The First Ruby Buyer

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• Unknown

  28.06.2014 edited 28.06.2014

  keep writing it was awesome

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• wert855 (IN1) Posts: 758

  29.06.2014 edited 29.06.2014

  wht hapened in last part the ten rubies made them red stone

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• Elfangor Posts: 3,974

  29.06.2014 edited 29.06.2014

  They "completed" the statue the castle folk were building. The statue was never really planned so the power of the rubies just used what was available to it.

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• deathsweeper (US1) Posts: 2,251

  29.06.2014 edited 29.06.2014

  I read the first few parts. Good story but I cant read it. When I read I don't like reading paragraphs that are 20 lines long. Put a few more indents and there and I would give it a try. Makes a HUGE difference.

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• daxter91 Posts: 1,606

  30.06.2014 edited 30.06.2014

  you should make this into a paper copy

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• lordzachary Posts: 11

  30.06.2014 edited 30.06.2014

  please finish it

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• Elfangor Posts: 3,974

  25.07.2014 edited 25.07.2014

  So it may be read...bump.

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• Elfangor Posts: 3,974

  07.09.2014 edited 07.09.2014

  Once you get here, click the link in my signature to start over.

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• Elfangor Posts: 3,974

  29.11.2014 edited 29.11.2014

  Boom! At the top!

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• SwayerAvatar (US1) Posts: 6

  29.11.2014 edited 29.11.2014

  Awsome story bro keep it up

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• TitoUltimatum (US1) US1 Posts: 1,590

  05.12.2014 edited 05.12.2014

  continue good sir

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• R.C3 Posts: 105

  10.12.2014 edited 10.12.2014

  Amazing i need 3rd part what say?

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• Anonamous (US1) Posts: 74

  17.04.2015 edited 17.04.2015

  Amazing story.

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• Emperor Spectra Posts: 104

  17.04.2015 edited 17.04.2015

  5 stars please continue it one of the best stories I've read in a long time

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